Monday, January 7, 2008

Home.

I may walk down that unnamed road again,
meet those strange faces too.
Or maybe,I'll just stand and look-
at the raindrops drawing patterns on my windowpane.
Maybe I'll see myself on the glass then-
and maybe I'll cry or just silently live the pain.
Just when I'll be down and blue,
a lone raindrop would land on my cheek.
Memories will come rushing by,and
I'll be reminded of you.
Even as the world goes wild,I shall be in peace.
In you I shall find a muse,
in you-a refuge...

P.S: lousy poetry.kindly excuse.

19 comments:

Neel said...

It's amazing how you can speak right to my heart!

Angika said...

My my. You're really creative I must say! Sujaan told me about your Hindi songs and English lines post, I came here to look at it. Nice!

inihos said...

a raindrop, a word, a touch...simple things bring back brilliant memories sometimes

WHAT'S IN A NAME ? said...

This is true sublime simple poetry. Has a language of its own.
May you write a thousand of them.

The Mad Girl said...

To be honest, not your best poetry...but a nice one.It speaks volumes.

phoenix said...

very intense!!amazing poetry!

Noisy Autist said...

'lousy poetry'? dont be that modest.

onnesha said...

wow if thats lousy,i want to read you when you are on a writing spree.

Kalyan said...

beautiful words...you have crafted it beautifully that we can really feel it!

Rajarshi said...

not lousy...lyrical!

panu said...

Ah well. Sort of futurethought na? but true.

adwaita said...

"lousy"...????
are u mad??!!!
thr r these ppl who write shit and think they r brilliant and this is so sigh sigh i dunno dont hav the appropriate words sigh sigh :)

Phemonoe said...

didn't find it lousy. who you kidding, eh?

Doubletake, Doublethink. said...

i like.

not lousy.

write more.

Astraeus said...

:)

beautiful, bedatri.. how are u otherwise?

speedpost said...

lousy.

see that would be me.

good job.

Lucid Darkness said...

The rain is beautiful.

Nice.

Solitaire said...

So beautiful. I am sure every person has experienced this moment at some point in their life.

Pongy Papaya said...

like i said...ur being rude to this post and especially when you call it 'Home'.
nice post.YES.
n finally Monami has a blog.waiting for cosmic twinnie's response