Don’t be scared of the forceps, child
Although the knives have been sharpened well.
The needle will only prick for a second,
And you will only bleed for a while.
The steel may pinch your unformed toes
And bring a soft cringe on your slimy forehead.
It’s only a few hours’ doing, child-
Don’t let all the blood scare you.
Your mother will probably heave a sigh
Because this was the way you had to die;
Only from the clanging of metal claws,
Cocooned in mists of injected anaesthetics-
Faraway from the wars we adults fight.
Don’t cry dear child, you’ll be alright.
17 comments:
fast...and even before u can react,death kisses ur lovely eyes...
Reminds me of a passage from Godot. Something about being born astride a grave. Did you write this?
of course i did
I really liked the choice of words-gives the piece an icy and distant touch.
Reminds me of this track called "Lightning Crashes" by Live
I have not read the great poems as English is not my subject...but i am writing this down so that during my next date with the steel i do not cry!!
so much like Pink Floyd's 'Comfortably Numb'. Its strange how i find a weird sense of familiarity with ur writings!
ironically, when i read this, i was due to be operated 2 days later.. its only now that i'm back home and i re-read this n comment!
loved it.
i really have nothing more to say.
Woah, morbidity at its rawest best. An illustration is due, I'll give you credit :)
It's hauntingly beautiful. Very nice.
the best one from you i've come across till date..gave me goosebumps..
Beautiful, shocking, harsh, touching...four words hardly used together. Shivers down the spine.
Ah, hmmm...
(surprising how vella comments can be :-P)
brutal and morbid..loved it :)
modern medicine... wonder how modern it really is...
i love how you can jump into the subject from the first line... very well written loved it
Keep writing. You inspire me.
gentle yet brutal. and so impersonal....beautiful poem.
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