and then some more in living it.
there must be some joy in telling yourself that it's the truth
and then in saying it till you believe it.
there must be some joy in laughing till your jaw hurts
and then in slow falling off a cliff.
the world has its own joys, we are just too busy counting tears.
11 comments:
The wry 'tsk' at the beginning of this makes me want to let out a little scream in satisfaction. I cannot tell you how completely I am at peace with this bit of writing. This is perfection itself, B!
i know it's not one of my best.but this gave me a lot of peace.
thank you.
Simple yet profound.
Slow falling off a cliff and counting tears-good summaries
yes oh yes, there IS much joy in giving into a lie...lovely lines
This is AWESOME!! I like your poem very much and u r blog too. Some blog u have!!!
Good one. Liked it very much. Especially the last line. Very apt. Very complete.
That's wonderfully explained little boxes, keep going :)
Very wry. I Understand EVERY word. :)
The best parts of our lives are those under the carpet, eh?
:)
just set the mood!
loved this..dark and dry
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